The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/18
Beautiful close...
Blessings~
02/08/18
Charming and beautiful. Well done!
This is a delightful piece. I enjoyed your descriptions and could picture it as if you painted it on my mind. There have been quite a few pieces like this this week. While it's on topic, it's not as out-of-the-way box as it might be, but you do have a unique post, which helps it stand out more. I don't think you needed the last stanza. I sense maybe you were afraid not everyone would see the topic in it, but to that I say trust yourself. You have talent and God put these words on your heart for a specific reason.
02/10/18
Nice!