The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/18
Wow! Glad you're okay...scars have a way of reminding us throughout our life, whether they're visible or not...always a reminder.

So glad your Dad acted quickly and that you are okay.

You certainly nailed the topic,

Thank you for sharing,

Blessings~
02/08/18
Great story! Well done and kept my interest.
This is delightful. You have a subtle sense of humor that made me smile and chuckle throughout. Be careful about using the universal you, when you really mean I (in describing how to get to the bathroom). I always enjoy it when I learn a new word. Unco will show up in one of my Words with Friends games soon. I appreciate your out-of-the-box take on the topic. There's nothing like a good I-had-to-pee story, especially if it ends in a trip to the hospital! You held my attention from beginning to end.
I agree great story! Thank you so much for sharing.
God Bless.
02/10/18
Great take and triggered memories of my own dad's intervention in one of my dramas! Gave a giggle and a call for more. Every blessing.
02/10/18
Great essay! Like others, I learned a new word (unco)...
02/12/18
Ouch! Enjoyed your story! I too will be vocabulary building with "unco".