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Wow! Glad you're okay...scars have a way of reminding us throughout our life, whether they're visible or not...always a reminder.

So glad your Dad acted quickly and that you are okay.

You certainly nailed the topic,

Thank you for sharing,

Great story! Well done and kept my interest.
This is delightful. You have a subtle sense of humor that made me smile and chuckle throughout. Be careful about using the universal you, when you really mean I (in describing how to get to the bathroom). I always enjoy it when I learn a new word. Unco will show up in one of my Words with Friends games soon. I appreciate your out-of-the-box take on the topic. There's nothing like a good I-had-to-pee story, especially if it ends in a trip to the hospital! You held my attention from beginning to end.
I agree great story! Thank you so much for sharing.
God Bless.
Great take and triggered memories of my own dad's intervention in one of my dramas! Gave a giggle and a call for more. Every blessing.
Great essay! Like others, I learned a new word (unco)...
Ouch! Enjoyed your story! I too will be vocabulary building with "unco".