The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/18
Great job!
BLessings~
I enjoyed this very much. There are many things that I can and do relate to.

Very impressed with your ability to make it rhyme and still relay your message.

God Bless.
01/23/18
I enjoyed this!
I really enjoyed the tempo and flow of your poem. It provided a lot to contemplate while keeping a delightful flow. Enjoyable! Good job!