The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/18
What a lovely story well written.
01/11/18
Great story and great build up to the climatic end - when the book was found.
01/12/18
I enjoyed your story. I can imagine that being a part of a bigger story.
01/13/18
An interesting story. Was it set in a country where the bible was not allowed?
01/14/18
I like the way you gradually grew your story about the Bible. It made your reader guess, of course, that it was the Bible, but brought us along on your exciting adventure. It would help if you could separate your text for easier reading. Great job!
Truly, the freedom, to read the Bible is lost when it is not read.
I really appreciated your subject matter having spent time in a communist country. Also I owe my life to my bible reading grandmother.

It is a pity there is a word limit. I am sure you have more to share.