The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/17
Great message!
Blessings~
11/10/17
You are right: when moving one does lose friends, yet keep on writing and you might find some who stay friends forever. Well written piece about topic.
Bless you.
11/11/17
What a friend we do have in Jesus. Other friends may leave us, but Jesus is constant.

Your poem had a good message.

Suggestion: to and fro
11/11/17
In the second stanza been unless you say it bean) and seen don't rhyme.

Maybe end with traveled and unraveled.
11/11/17
I enjoyed the poem format you used for the topic and your point of Jesus being a constant.

I felt like the poem lost its cohesiveness after the fifth stanza. You went from Jesus being the ultimate friend when other friendships waver to your best friend being a mother and good constant friendships.