The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/17
Great job on this narrative. I enjoyed the action and the touching father- daughter relationship.
10/31/17
Very dramatic retelling of a father rescuing his children.
That was a story to enjoy even if there was some "unknown" event coming.

As a side, I would wonder how your Dad would tell the same story to your kids.

Nicely written. Interesting story.
11/02/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish in the Intermediate category, Betty.