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Great job presenting this biblical account with its poignant lesson.
Very interesting viewpoint. Well written.
The time to repent had passed for the rich man.I believe he thought his begging would make Father Abraham relent, but in the end it wasn't Father Abraham's decision to make.
This is a very well thought out retelling that Bible story. You added other Bible points to make your writing even more forceful.

This could be used as a warning to some or an encouragement to others.

Well written.
Congratulations on your 4th place finish in the Intermediate category, Rebecca.