The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/17
Great job with the brief illustrations of getting cold feet. It was an enjoyable read.
10/22/17
I enjoyed this very much!
BLessings~
10/24/17
I also enjoyed your poem. I like rhyming too.
I don't enough about poetry to critique it but I do like the positive message. Well done.
Thank you for writing your thoughts in the form you chose.

Your thoughts could be repeated nicely that way until you came to your conclusion.

Keep writing in the form that seems to best express your thoughts.
10/26/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the Intermediate category, Dorothy!

Your persistence and growing writing skills have earned this well deserved recognition.

In the 3rd stanza, I wondered if you wanted to use the rhyming word, sank.