The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/17
What a delightful well described story of a diamond in the rough!
And your little tid bit at the end about a ghost was fun.
My folks bought an old farm house without running water, furnace and indoor plumbing.in the mid 50's. I was a teenager and I can relate to all those jobs of fixing up an old house.
No one knows all the hard work when they see the beautiful results. I believe the same when a person is born again and no one knows the hard work God does rehabbing a person.
Great job.
09/08/17
Good job showing the progression of the project, and giving a picture of the before and after effect. I could definitely imagine what the house looks like now and only wish I could see it.

The formatting of the challenge articles changes the look of the articles, so I've taken to putting spaces between the paragraphs to make it a little easier to read.
09/08/17
Fabulous!
Blessings~
09/14/17
I really enjoyed reading your perfectly on topic story. I assume it is true - kudos to your sis' for seeing a "diamond" in the rough!
09/14/17
I am a fan of HGTV, so your story was a fun and interesting read. I wish you could post pictures of the finished rooms.
09/14/17
Don't forget to double-space between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
I liked the opening of the story. It drew me into the story.

Congratulations to your sister for working so hard to find this hidden treasures.

I thought the ending was a little distracting to me because ghosts were not mentioned before

Great job of taking us through the process of flipping a house.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Congratulations Betty!
Well done,Blessings~
09/14/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish in the Intermediate category, Betty.