The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/17
Fantastic poem. You did a wonderful job covering a lot of varied subjects without losing sight of the topic. Very well written. A definite winner, in my books. Good luck with the judges.
I love the rhyme!
Your poem had these main themes: dreams, childhood games, cooking, farming, life goals, knitting, engineering, school and God. Would there have been a way to take one main theme and develop it to show that at times there can be a need of "going back to the drawing board"? You may not have been able to get the minimum number of words in some of these but it might have held together to express the point of this weeks topic.

Just for practice, take one of these area and see how you could develop it even if it is too short to enter. Many short poetic works are filled with meaning.
08/14/17
Wonderful!
Blessings~
08/17/17
Great poem and congrats on 1st place.
After mentioning God I would have put the knitting , architects and school, before the spiritual lessons. Just a thought.
As an artist and creative person I have gone back to the drawing board a lot.
09/20/17
Lovely and encouraging poem!

Many Blessings!