The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/17
Good job with the dialect and with creating an interesting story.

Red Ink: Try putting a space between the paragraphs to make it a little easier to read. There were some mechanical errors (it should be reckon, not recon) that could be corrected through more proofreading.
07/14/17
Wonderful story and great approach to the topic.
I enjoyed this!
Blessings~
07/20/17
Congrats!
Blessings~