The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/17
Great work on the topic! We ought to learn how to be still and trust in the lord. Thank you for sharing.

I would suggest, you could find a way to break up the sentences at the forth paragraph.

Keep writing. You're doing great! Blessings
One of the hardest things for us to pray is "thy will be done" when we want our will to be done. Drawing close to God is the only thing that will help us to ever be able to pray like Jesus.

well written story.
06/18/17
Wonderful testimony of God's care! Take some extra moments to check for typos and review comma and apostrophe use to clean up your great story. Blessings as you continue your journey as a writer.