The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful! You nailed the topic. If only those that created such sorry and pain could read it and be converted. Great job. God bless.
This is quite profound. I could totally relate and found a lump forming in my throat.

My red ink is tiny. You repeated lies. Also some lines are a bit hard to understand. My advice is to ask someone read it aloud. If she stumbles rework that line. (If you don't have someone, read it aloud yourself. Tape it and listen if possible after a day has passed.)

I think you covered the topic in a fairly fresh way. The Message is as old as time, but one we struggle with still today. You delivered God's words in a beautiful way.