The Official Writing Challenge
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This is quite lovely. It flows nicely. I could definitely relate to the MC's voice. As mere humans, we so totally don't get God's plan. Great job.
The are still times I get impatient waiting on the Lord's direction. Your poem is an excellent reminder of His ways not being our ways.
Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the Intermediate category and moving up to the Advanced category, Caleb.

I'm so excited for you! You've worked so hard for this moment.
Congratulations on your 9th place win in the EC awards this week, Caleb.
Congratulations Caleb on your EC win. How exciting!
This poetry was quite beautiful. It was simple and concise but expressed such emotions.

The flow of the poem had a nice rhythm.

I know you have worked incredibly hard on your poetry.

Congratulations on your EC entry.