The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/17
Well done,
Blessings~
05/23/17
Your topic was good in that you described two characters that most people would consider, dull. Yes, they both did stupid things and met untimely fates.

As time and events reveal the betrayal of Jesus did not eventually benefit him.

The sentence just copied would have worked better with a comma between reveal and the.

Nice details. Did you run out of room for a satisfying conclusion?
05/23/17
Your topic was good in that you described two characters that most people would consider, dull. Yes, they both did stupid things and met untimely fates.

As time and events reveal the betrayal of Jesus did not eventually benefit him.

The sentence just copied would have worked better with a comma between reveal and the.

Nice details. Did you run out of room for a satisfying conclusion?
05/23/17
Sorry, I commented twice.

Overall, you did a great job with this topic. :)