The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/17
Great job! I loved it.

Blessings~
Nicely done. This is a very clear encouragement to the church to continue in unity regarding the basics of Christian doctrine: salvation by faith in the Lord Jesus Christ. God IS keeping His soldiers fighting, but hopefully not against each other!
Please be careful to edit your work; there were some typos which hindered easy flow of reading.
Thanks for your positive submission.
"amongst amongst"? You doubled the word.

Your article reminded me of Eph. 4:3, “endeavoring to keep the unity of the Spirit in the bond of peace.”

05/17/17
This piece had a good flow. Each paragraph seemed to transition nicely into the next.

I remember that boxing ring toy.
05/18/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the Intermediate category and moving up to the Advanced division.

Well done.

05/21/17
Thanks Bonnie. Where is the notification that I moved up to Advanced? Should I have received a message about that?
05/23/17
OK. I just read the guidelines again and realise that 1st place means a move up!