The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/17
Loved this story! Daddy's little girl no matter what...they never feel anyone is good enough for their little girls! My loving Dad was so protective of me as well, to this day I miss him and he's gone 18 years!

Great job with this, I enjoyed and it had me smiling from ear to ear with some glittering tears at the end. Beautifully done.

Blessings.
I love the concept of this story -- we females in particular are very familiar with the "overprotective dad" situation.
There are quite a few punctuation and typo difficulties which interfered with reading the story smoothly. Please be careful to review your submission in order to make reading what you've written easier, because the story was good, and the dialog was realistic.
Thanks for your submission--keep up the good work!
05/17/17
I believe the majority of dads only want what is best for their daughters.

I think every relationship has its hot button topics.
05/18/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the Intermediate category, Betty.

I liked your title.