The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/17
this is a winner. You did a great job of using words to paint pictures.

One word of advice, don't give away the story in the title. I figured out where you were going by the title. It would have had a greater impact and kept us guessing if you would have given it a different title.

Great job. I really enjoyed it. it brought back so many memories of my wife telling me to go check on the noise she heard in the middle of the night. God bless and I will watch for more of your writtings.
05/09/17
I enjoyed your story too