The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
05/07/17
It sounded like you had a wonderful time being a clown. I would have liked to have felt more of your emotions as you performed some of those tricks and to have seen you put those into picture words. Show it not tell it.

You have so many great opportunities to express yourself in the many life experiences as a clown. Draw on them to enrich our lives with your interesting life. But bring them to life. Hope this helps. God bless.