The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a hoot! I appreciated the honesty in the MC and opening up about the good looking hunk...I especially appreciated the internal dialogue running through her head.

Great job!

I truly enjoyed reading your entry to the challenge. What a delightful internal battle - your words captured the struggle.
You certainly captured the internal struggle we all face battling temptation. You excelled in that. It was a little to descriptive for my prudish ways, and used, for my taste to sexually enticing words. It was well written and maybe I am being too sensitive. God bless
It is sometimes hard to stop our thoughts, but I think she might have been better off leaving before she acted upon any of them.

Very honest storytelling.
Congratulations on winning 1st place in the Intermediate category, Rebecca.

I like your style of writing and look forward to reading more of your work.