The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/17
You nailed the topic in a unique and interesting way.
Well done.

Blessings~
Some interesting thoughts there. Bringing in examples of people from the real world made it easy to relate to. If you'd like some red ink critique, just message me. Good on you for entering!
05/03/17
I like how you used various people in power around the country. However, I felt like the cadence didn't flow smoothly. Maybe longer verses?