The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/17
Lovely!
BLessings~
04/23/17
Your first verse hooked me although I am a harsh critic of poetry. I like to see rhythm if not necessarily rhyming, and some of your verses were good. I feel you were perhaps time challenged and could have concentrated on some planning and polishing, but well done. I shall look for more.
04/24/17
I feel the same that you may have been challenged for time. It has lots of potential and some very good verse.
You have written a nice take on accidents. With God there is no accident except what he allows for his own purpose. Think about this one.
06/19/17
I enjoyed reading your poem.

An interesting take on the topic.

So many accidents can occur in life. As you mentioned, Jesus coming to earth and dying in our place was NOT one.

Many Blessings to you.