The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/17
Cleverly done! I very much enjoyed reading your take on this topic. I especially loved this line which I felt encapsulated your whole entry: "He humbly hung his head so more of the King could be seen."
04/13/17
You really had my attention the whole story and such a switch when we found out they were not people.
I liked this a lot.
04/13/17
Cleverly done! Topical too, with Easter approaching.
Well done. you certainly would have my vote if I were a judge!
04/16/17
A lovely take on the theme. Well done.
I liked how your characters spoke but kept their identity hidden until much later in your story.

You made good use of that Bible story.
04/18/17
Outstanding job. A winner in my book. Good hook. Good flow and finish.

It was well crafted and expertly written. Kept me reading the whole way.

Your creativity is well displayed.

I will look for future writings. God bless.
04/20/17
What a novel approach to this story. Well done on your placing. Keep it up!
04/24/17
I enjoyed your clever, unique use of the topic. Congratulations with your level win.