The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cleverly written. it is amazing how often we us the word bug meaning so many different situations.

I am a fan of poetry, so really enjoyed it.
You have three or four different kinds of "bugs" in your piece. I would have enjoyed them more if each one had been grouped together and then use a nice transition to the next kind of "bug".

Your rhyming in pleasant. That usually takes some work and thought. Nicely done.
04/27/17
Very nicely written, Dorothy. I was surprised by all the different ways the word bug can be used.

Keep writing!