The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/17
Okay this is scary. Not only can I relate so well to your story of Tarantulas, I lived in Broken Bow (or nearby) for twenty years.

You did a great job on the story. Hit the topic, great hook and kept the readers interested and wondering. I want to read more.

I remember when my father came to visit us from Illinois. We were sitting in the living room and a Tarantula started crawling up our screen door.

He told me he never new that you could drive down the road and see a spider crossing. Yep! They get that big.

Super job. We must get connected on private message to catch up on happenings in Broken Bow. God Bless
Childhood stories are a sure winner because of interest and innocence.

Bubby could be capitalized to indicate it was usually a name for a person.

Towards the end it seemed there were some incomplete sentences. Read slowly out loud to your self and see if you find them.


04/27/17
Congratulations on placing 3rd place in the Beginners category this week, Betty.

This story was right on topic. I can see you were a brave little girl; the Tarantula didn't even seem to phase you.