The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay this is scary. Not only can I relate so well to your story of Tarantulas, I lived in Broken Bow (or nearby) for twenty years.

You did a great job on the story. Hit the topic, great hook and kept the readers interested and wondering. I want to read more.

I remember when my father came to visit us from Illinois. We were sitting in the living room and a Tarantula started crawling up our screen door.

He told me he never new that you could drive down the road and see a spider crossing. Yep! They get that big.

Super job. We must get connected on private message to catch up on happenings in Broken Bow. God Bless
Childhood stories are a sure winner because of interest and innocence.

Bubby could be capitalized to indicate it was usually a name for a person.

Towards the end it seemed there were some incomplete sentences. Read slowly out loud to your self and see if you find them.

Congratulations on placing 3rd place in the Beginners category this week, Betty.

This story was right on topic. I can see you were a brave little girl; the Tarantula didn't even seem to phase you.