The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/17
You had some real good thoughts on exploiting children for gain. One bit of advice is not to let everyone know what your writing is about ahead of time. By that I mean the title. Leave some guessing before they start reading. Also, the very first part needs a good hook. You jumped right in and listed a lot of those exploitations. You had so many good examples. I would have taken one or two and expanded on them in dialogue or active examples. It is a powerful message to share with others. You had some good points. Hope this helps in the future. God bless and keep writing.
You make some great points. Points that should be obvious, but sometimes in our hurry to do it all, those little ones get left behind.I think your take on the topic really was outside of the box.