The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/17
I think this is really well-written and easy to read. I appreciate that you exposed a tenderness in your heart, and it didn't yield a heaviness or bitterness, but instead joy and gratitude.
Personally, autobiographies are hard for me to read, but I sunk right into yours, and enjoyed it. Thank you!
03/18/17
I am jealous. What a wonderful story. A great devotional. I wish it had a better hook. Not that a verse isn't nice, but something to really grab your interest. It was a great piece though. A few little miscues on grammar and wrong words. Reread and you will catch them. Super job. I envy your childhood. Well done. God bless.
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