The Official Writing Challenge
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Good points about shifting our attitudes and perspectives.
Well said.
Great message!

Thanks for an enjoyable poem. Good thoughts. I wish I had more experience in critiquing poems, all I can say is what I liked. It had a good message. Red ink, my opinion only, some of the rhythm seemed to be off. I count syllables. God bless
One answer he gives is found in James 1. "Count it all JOY when you encounter various trial."

Trials are the stepping stones we need to grow up to the measure of Christ.

I like your work. Keep writing.
Poetry is not usually my favorite, but I needed to hear the words you wrote. I can't go into too much detail, but trust me that the Holy Spirit used your poem to lighten my dark heart right now. God bless.
Congratulations on finishing 4th place in the Intermediate category this week, Dorthy.

It is better to focus on the positive. Thank you for being a committed writer.