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Nice reflections! Reminds me of an ice storm that hit my home (in the Ozarks) several years ago. We were without power for almost two weeks. Times like those really teach you to appreciate the basics!
Wonderful story with a great message.
Great story. I lived in Oklahoma for forty years. Every spring we prayed earnestly that another f5 tornado would not hit again. I think you had a good handle on the topic. Good beginning. I think the story flowed well to prove your point. The ending was good, but maybe a little predictable. Overall I think it was a very well written piece. God bless.