The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/17
Great Story. Jesus is our healer and deliverer!! Check your quotation marks.
well written. I have a son who plays guitar, praying he will be saved and play for the Lord some day.
02/25/17
Nice!
02/26/17
Wonderful story! You told it very well. I agree about the quotation marks in an earlier comment. I would also suggest you brush up on the difference between writing thoughts and dialogue. Keep writing
02/28/17
Great job. Short but very sweet. Some minor grammar errors. I think you were on topic. Even though it was predictable it was a good read. Good start and hook. God bless.