The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/17
Cute and enjoyable read!
Well done,
Blessings~
02/17/17
I really liked the line "we were not only the main event--we were the side show as well."
I was entertained by this life-comedy although not all the participants ended up laughing.

Well told.
02/23/17
Congratulations on first place with a delightful story. Made me remember our Renault Dauphine in the early 60's, Every Wed. on my day off I would be in the shop.
And my VW Bug when I took it in and said it sounded like a sewing machine, they agreed. Your descriptions were precious.
02/24/17
Congratulations on your 1st place ranking in level 2 category. Well done.
04/26/17
hahaha your line "We must have deemed it more humane to her dignity if we just let her safely bounce around in the grassy median alone" was seriously a hoot and had me guffawing.