The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/17
That was sweet, nice story with a good ending. and on topic.
02/17/17
Great job with this!
Lovely...
Blessings~
02/17/17
Nice story! Keep on writing!
02/18/17
A beautiful story, well written with a delightful ending.
In spite of the seriousness of the story, it sounds like it could be made into a child's story since it has a happy ending and includes both a child and a parent.

Each part of the story could be well illustrated with pictures of the setting and the characters. The emotions would be expressed on their face. Anyone interested in taking this on, contact the author.
A very "sweet" story with a bit of an English accent perhaps? I enjoyed the story very much. A precious relationship stands out between the mother and child. Keep writing, I will keep reading!
02/24/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place ranking in level 2 category. I'm not surprised & look forward to reading more in the future.