The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/17
Great job!
I loved it.
Blessings~
02/17/17
Nice!
Nice job on the poem. I like to write poetry myself.

I loved how your related the word jam to various situations you find yourself in. Then showed how God uses them for our good.

The only tad bit of red ink is...you might want to check to see if your spaces in your sentences came through okay.

You have two semi-colons that got stuck in the beginning of your sentences.
You demonstrate well that faith and trust is important in life where-in lie a multitude of life's jams.

Comfort and peace are the rewards.