The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/17
You kept me wondering how this would end. I am not sure if your story meets the criteria of the topic, but it was a well written play on words. Great job in keeping me wondering. You either were a skater or did a lot of research. I was a little confused in the first paragraph as to what type of skating, i.e.,roller, ice, or just skating on a floor with socks. The second paragraph enlightened me. Remember your audience might not be ice skating literate. A little revising would clear that up. And I was a little confused about the woodchucks. I liked it a lot and hope my comments will help in future writing. I really liked it. God bless.
02/08/17
I very much appreciated your approach to this topic--so different and creative.
02/10/17
Congrats!
Blessings~
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 15 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
04/13/17
Phew-wow what a crazy ride. Congratulations on your level win.