The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/17
Awww...I loved this!

Well done,
Blessings~
A well written emotional homey story.
Is it "She sit down" or "She sat down"? Also, was one lip puckered or two lips puckered as she stirred her oatmeal?

I liked the thoughtfulness of the mother and then her creativeness of her dress making skill. (This isn't taught anymore in school.)

Keep writing homey stories like this.
01/27/17
That was a lovely story. I felt the tension in the mother trying to make ends meet and still fulfil her daughter's wish. I couldn't see how it would work - but you had a very creative solution.
02/02/17
A well written story to remind us how something so simple to remedy can bring happinsss and joy to a child in a world filled with disappointments.