The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/17
I liked your story. It flowed well and the suspense kept me reading. Good job.
01/26/17
Save, I found this very intriguing and enjoyed the surprise ending, well written
Congratulations!
01/27/17
Well put together. Has the ring of reality, and held my attention. Life is not always so kind, so it helps when stories have a happy ending.

Congratulations on your 1st place win!

God bless - Trudy
01/30/17
Your story was a well written and exciting ride to a wonderful and I'd say -God intended outcome.
Congratulations on your winning entry.
01/30/17
Congratulations on first place! Very good flow, enjoyed it.