The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/17
Im not one who is good at critiquing poetry. So I am not going to try.

But I will say I loved the last few lines of this poem. Reminds me of the old song "I'd rather have Jesus."
01/27/17
Thanks for this, Dorothy -

So glad we are sealed by the Holy Spirit forever.

God bless - Trudy