The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely. We all need to daydream at times. I think God knew we would need an active imagination to get through the hard times. The lines about only humans can dream although dogs can too seemed a bit contradictory, but other than that, I thought the rest was quite relatable. I'd love to challenge you to comment on every entry in your level and then do a few from levels 3 and 4. I've found by reading and commenting on others', I discover what works or doesn't, then I can tweak my own stories with that knowledge. It has helped so much.
This poem had some beautiful examples of daydreamers.

I felt the rhythm was slightly off.

Good job overall