The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/06
WOW! so much like how I myself feel. Your writing is very similar to mine and I think you have done an awesome job expressing yourself
01/11/06
Well done on writing your poem. It flowed very nicely
and has a powerful punch.
Yes this really does flow very well, and needs just a little polishing. Complicated emotions, simply told, give this poem its punch. God bless.
Laurie, you've tapped into such depth in this poem. I'm stunned at the honesty and eloquence it holds. This is absolutely beautiful!
Very deep and insightful - as usual! It hit me that we so often try to run from (or hide from) pain rather than owning it...and then handing it to God.

Favorite stanza: "With Him beside me I can cry
His presence seems to comfort me.
I’ve learned my pain I can’t deny,
Must let it out to be set free."
01/16/06
So honest - so true - and so healing. God wiil use this I'm sure to touch many. Beatiful writing.