The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/16
Nicely done!

God bless~
I really enjoyed this. I found the rhymes delightful and to my ears, it flowed nicely. You nailed the topic and posed some interesting questions and delivered a great message.
12/04/16
Your poem was on topic and held many important truths.

I would add the word, When, as the first word of the first stanza. Also, did you mean jigsaw or zigsaw?
12/08/16
Congratulations, Dorothy, for placing 2nd place in the Intermediate category.

Your poem had many interesting points.