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This piece has "bounce" and is easy to read.

Good thoughts, well written.
This was a cute story that flowed well. A tiny red ink is that your "Be.." should be capitalized where you have "be calm and take..." Your title was catchy and I liked how you made the contrast between chilling out or having passion and living life to the fullest. I really liked how you worded your last paragraph also.
You packed so much wisdom in a short article. This is excellent. I love your last line: " I’ll strive to keep my dreams fired up and put up my umbrella against the rain."

Great outlook on life. Liked the verses you chose too.