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A good retelling of a great story from the Bible. Young kids would benefit from such a story when presented as being a true incident in the life of Jesus.
11/10/16
I love how you brought this to life in an entirely new way. The paragraph where Jesus foresaw the Holocaust to ISIS ... gripping.

"Again" was a reminder to not give up. Satan comes, "again," and if Jesus had to repeat the Word of God, so do we. Great piece.