The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/16
I see you put quite a bit of research into this...thank you for the wise information, even though I felt I needed a dictionary to get through it...but that's just me. I would have started with the line..."God invented days, nights, weeks"-and continued from there to make it a little less academic. Thank you for all your work!
You have a wonderful sense of humor. You had me snickering several times. Unfortunately, the beginning was a bit dry and hard to get through. You need to lead off with your jokes right away. I thought it was going to be a dry essay on the etymology of the word. Once you got going with the humor, you thoroughly entertained me. You have a lot of potential. Keep writing, but I also want to challenge you to read and comment on at least 3 entries in each level. The more you do that, the better your own work will become. Keep at it.