The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/16
This was a good read with just enough good descriptive language to conceptualise the scenario. My mother used to correct me with "who's 'she', the cats mothe?" I would have like mor than a lot of she's and hers. Flow was lovely. Scone last paragraph contained rather a lot of profundity for a girl in ICU. I imagine that these notions could well have percolated in the ensuing days prior to her departure. You finished really well