The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some good points. Pretty much everything can be bad in excess (except Jesus' love of course). Be aware of how many times you used the topic word. I sense you may have done it on purpose, but it did bog me down a bit. A story might never use the topic word, yet still be spot on topic. I'd encourage you to read and comment on at least two stories in every level. It's always good to figure out what does or doesn't work for you and then apply it to your own work. I did like your line about overloading in Jesus' love. I thought it clever and a nice way to show how much he truly loves us.