The Official Writing Challenge
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It wasn't a smooth easy read for me. I think it was because I was not able to keep track of who was doing the talking. I also noticed a different spelling in Marion, and Marian

It did sound like the day was hectic until the Bible verses began to be put to good use.

We all need to remember the verses of the Bible were put there for us to use and live by each day.
Love how He unpacks truth for us in the everyday. Enjoy the theme, the take home and the outcome.
This is an interesting story that shows how little things can weigh us down and turn into much bigger things. It also shows how if something is important to us, it's important to God too.

Be careful about POV shifts. You hopped into a few different heads. You showed Jamie's thoughts, Marion's, and Mom's. Remember the reader should only know what the MC sees, hears, thinks, or knows.

I think you did a nice job of writing on topic. I suspect the wife may have been praying for her husband for some time. God has wonderful ways of touching our hearts when we least expect it.