The Official Writing Challenge
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I am going to take this piece as the well written work of the main character being described.

I liked it being concise and yet fully describing both the actions and emotions of the day.

I liked how it all fit together without any conversation from anyone.

Nice work.
This is a sweet story that pretty much everyone can relate to on one level or another. You did a nice job of showcasing the topic.