The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very easy to read poem. I flowed nicely because of the even verses.

The thought and content are right on the mark. It would be well if we each take time to examine our "load". When it is too much, give it to him.
I enjoyed this. I thought it flowed nicely, and it touched my heart. It was a great message for the day I had today.