The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/16
Very well done. I have but one tiny bit of red ink. Prospect of marriage had "eluded" him.
09/03/16
Excellent job with the topic and well delivered in content.

Blessings~
09/04/16
Scary to think how marriage and the God intended purpose of marriage is being torn down in our society. This read as though it were a true story. Not sure if it was or not. It challenges to take a stand for the truth of God's word. Well done.
You started and the end and then told how he got there.

I liked this oranization.

Lesson taught. If we can't change the evil, depart from it.

Well ilustrated with the small group but a whole church could have been used.