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Very well done. I have but one tiny bit of red ink. Prospect of marriage had "eluded" him.
Excellent job with the topic and well delivered in content.

Scary to think how marriage and the God intended purpose of marriage is being torn down in our society. This read as though it were a true story. Not sure if it was or not. It challenges to take a stand for the truth of God's word. Well done.
You started and the end and then told how he got there.

I liked this oranization.

Lesson taught. If we can't change the evil, depart from it.

Well ilustrated with the small group but a whole church could have been used.