The Official Writing Challenge
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I love poetry. I love writing it and reading it. I saw that there was a little spacing issue for some reason on the post, but I enjoyed this poem.
I liked the consistent rhythm and rhyme as well as the message brought to mind.

It seems poetry is what is in you. Keep bringing it to the surface in what you write.
This is quite lovely and has a powerful message. Most of the lines flowed right off the page. I enjoyed your fresh take on the topic.